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A Story that Really Hits the Nail on the Head!!!

Postby lumberjacksdaughter » Fri May 11, 2012 4:11 pm

The rights to my published novelette, THE GRIM SHADOW http://www.thegrimshadow.com, reverted back to me the end of April so I put it online. Takes about 45 minutes to read. I proofread it twice so hopefully there are no glaring errors.

In The Dimension of Barbarik there are six Clans: The True Believers, The Idealists, The Power Hungry, The Skeptics, The Indifferent and The Truly Persecuted. Nanah Cub is a True Believer with a promise seared into his heart’s memory - he will be there to greet Tare Ree upon her entrance into Barbarik. Meanwhile, The Executioner has been patiently lurking in the grim shadow that has crept insidiously over the land, making it a race against time to see who gets to Tare Ree first! A story packed full of action, suspense, betrayal, terrorism and a dubious political election, The Grim Shadow is at its core a parable of courage, loyalty, and love.
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Re: A Story that Really Hits the Nail on the Head!!!

Postby Juliette » Fri May 11, 2012 6:54 pm

lumberjacksdaughter wrote:The rights to my published novelette, http://www.thegrimshadow.com reverted back to me the end of April so I put it online. Takes about 45 minutes to read. I proofread it twice so hopefully there are no glaring errors.

In The Dimension of Barbarik there are six Clans: The True Believers, The Idealists, The Power Hungry, The Skeptics, The Indifferent and The Truly Persecuted. Nanah Cub is a True Believer with a promise seared into his heart’s memory - he will be there to greet Tare Ree upon her entrance into Barbarik. Meanwhile, The Executioner has been patiently lurking in the grim shadow that has crept insidiously over the land, making it a race against time to see who gets to Tare Ree first! A story packed full of action, suspense, betrayal, terrorism and a dubious political election, The Grim Shadow is at its core a parable of courage, loyalty, and love.


I will read it, thanks!
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Re: A Story that Really Hits the Nail on the Head!!!

Postby believer » Sat May 12, 2012 1:31 am

Oh my! That was a wonderful read. Thank you so much. I recommend it to all.
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Re: A Story that Really Hits the Nail on the Head!!!

Postby lumberjacksdaughter » Sat May 12, 2012 7:05 am

believer wrote:Oh my! That was a wonderful read. Thank you so much. I recommend it to all.


Wow! Thanks.
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Re: A Story that Really Hits the Nail on the Head!!!

Postby lumberjacksdaughter » Sun May 27, 2012 8:01 pm

Excerpt: Jo Sef had an excruciatingly uneasy feeling - a horrible, nagging, gripping terror in the pit of his belly feeling. The echo of silent screams of innocents was reaching back through time from out of the future to grip his heart in a vice. But he was tortured by something even more, some memory he could not lay hold of, some dread he could not explain. There was something he must do. Someplace he needed to be. Someplace he had to be! Jo Sef's whole world had changed in an instant and nothing for him would ever be the same again.
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